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I tell you there will be someone else,
sometime, in the unseen future, and

you say you don't want anyone but me,
so sweet my love,

but you cannot follow me,
not this time.

I know you can't say goodbye –
neither can I.

I knew waking up to your voice this morning
I wouldn't be seeing you again,

or the shining life you painted for me last time
I trembled on the edge, but

you gave me two months
of love.
I am the girl who won't let go
I live in my house and I don't like my photos
And I hate the sound of the world outside
And I still haven't found my place to hide

But I saw horses from my window
They were watching all the cars go
And they don't care that I am broken
Close my eyes and run beside them

- Dala
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vespera Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Where are you??? :/
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sunshinegypsy Nov 5, 2012  Professional Writer
I moved and then got sick and went to the hospital. Apparently my gall bladder is also failing, but you can live without that.
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vespera Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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FuzzyHoser Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: So beautiful, Kate. You, the poem, the love, all of it.
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sunshinegypsy Nov 5, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you dear. :heart: I'm feeling a bit lost these days.
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:iconfuzzyhoser:
FuzzyHoser Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well I find you to be more than admirable, love. :tighthug:
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:iconsunshinegypsy:
sunshinegypsy Nov 5, 2012  Professional Writer
Then I am going to listen to you. :heart:
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:iconfuzzyhoser:
FuzzyHoser Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Let's add smart to your list of attributes. ;)
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