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i want my root beer over ice cream
the bitter undertaste
motorcycles with open throats

i want sugar, an
ice cream headache,
a heart that beats too hard
straining against the
caffeinated day

you pick your battles,
choose not to fight

kick out blindly, left foot
connecting with the unknown

fifty-three unremarkable minutes
footsteps in the corridor

i do not wish to see your face
share the unearthing

you tread upon my land
the watch is set
signals rising to meet the

spring unfurling gleefully
unwashed windows
planes making tracks through

the sun rise, blinding
to set, confidant of the dark

in the rising of words i pluck your voice
like violin strings
a quartet of unbidden cries or
a name i have forgotten

the rhythm of sameness
i copy your words in hand

we look for a pattern,
look to not notice the clock unwinding
fragile
©2008-2009 *sunshinegypsy
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:iconmagnolia-aislynn:
I enjoy this a lot! The emotion is very powerful and it comes through in the diction and the imagery. The form kind of threw me off a bit with the fluctuation in the number of lines in the stanzas, but perhaps that was what you were going for.
:iconsunshinegypsy:
sometimes it just makes it easier to say what i want to say. or perhaps i mean make other people hear what i want to say :)

--
In my dream, the angel shrugged & said, If we fail this time, it will be a failure of imagination & then she placed the world gently in the palm of my hand.

Brian Andreas

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